Two words
A line full of implications,
I got the blues.
(It's emptiness, there for the taking
Emptiness for creating, creating)
I don't read faces,
I don't read pictures,
People, spaces,
Love,
Anything. I can't read anything, except for words.
I can't see, and not say: "I see"
When it's all quiet,
I'm breathtakingly
Unoccupied, with it all -
I'm a poet but I just can't read.
But I see black and white in a million colours.
And I know,
Oh no,
I'm glad.
The blues still have some beautiful hues too -
Gimme the poets blues.
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Poetry
Isn't not me.
Poetry isn't anything
That isn't me.
Not 'freedom' at the price
Of liberty.
I repeat:
Not the limitless boundary.
Interpretation
Is not a replacement for meditation.
I don't need,
A written invitation, for filling in the spaces.
Interpret that.















Comments
And I definitely like the first poem best, particularly the paragraph:
"I don't read faces,
I don't read pictures,
People, spaces,
Love,
Anything. I can't read anything, except for words."
I'm not sure why, it just flows really well, you know?
The first poem is also very you-esque.
It seems very...reflective.
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I also love the idea behind the lines "I don't need, / A written invitation, for filling in the spaces."
It's great to see more of your work. I always look forward to your uploads
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~Adreanna; now in the extra-spicy brand of crazy, for a change.
I love the line "But I see black and white in a million colours."
Nice work.
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"The world is still a weird place, despite my efforts to make clear and perfect sense of it." - Hunter S. Thompson
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Spent like a week on the second one haha. I'm not sure why I grouped them together because they're pretty different but I guess maybe I sort of felt like they compliment each other for that reason. Anyhow thanks for the comment.
It makes me feel really good that you look forward to reading my work.
Thank you for the fav as well.
Oh... right right. Well I still do : P
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keep on rocking in the free world
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~Adreanna; now in the extra-spicy brand of crazy, for a change.
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